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Offline Timey

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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #15 on: February 07, 2012, 05:41:02 PM »
Fresh :cool2:

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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #16 on: February 08, 2012, 06:17:31 PM »
Nice, FlyChi!   :)
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #17 on: February 08, 2012, 06:32:08 PM »
Catchy!  Very nicely done.   :rockon:
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #18 on: February 08, 2012, 06:36:19 PM »
FlyChi can you post the rest of the text ?

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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #19 on: February 08, 2012, 07:15:28 PM »
impressive! I liked it, well done FlyChi!  :D
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #20 on: February 08, 2012, 10:56:01 PM »
It's a hit! Any chance you can make it available as a download, FlyChi? Or will we have to wait until your album release? ;)
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #21 on: February 09, 2012, 12:25:09 AM »
This is most excellent FlyChi! It all works, the music, the rap and the lyrics. I ain't no expert in rap but this sure sounds like good rap (and hip hop) to me! :cool2:
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #22 on: February 09, 2012, 07:04:10 AM »
Very good job, FlyChi. :)
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #23 on: February 09, 2012, 07:23:01 AM »
 :) great, I like rap a lot but nova days the lyrics are so out of context.
So you really made my day with this. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #24 on: February 09, 2012, 07:47:35 PM »
Really good song. Nice work. I like it  :thup:

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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #25 on: February 10, 2012, 11:28:18 AM »
Thanks again all. Here's the lyrics to the 2nd and 3rd Verse and I've made the link downloadable. More people listen to the songs with a lot of downloads and feedback on it, so If you are liking this, please support by downloading, leave a comment and/or take a second to click the heart.  I'll keep sharing as long as people are open to listen. Thanks y'all.

PitchBlackGold - Shift: http://soundcloud.com/pitchblackgold/shift

2nd Verse:

When the train comes
Who gon' hop on?
When the plane goes
Who gon' fly long
If the tanks come?
Who gon' stand strong?
Will we ever stop playing along?
A caged bird song
Got the club movin'
Got 'em blindfolded
Got their ears deaf
Lookin' hella molded
I heard the devil wrote it
Trying to make it law
From the speakers on the brain see it knaw
Novocane numb so they're Abel Cain dumb
Because the labels frame guns in the minds of the young
Charging up death when they speak off the tongue
Unseen movements in the laws of one
We can't pause the sun
Time's already begun
return to zero this age is done
No super hero from pages sprung
To save the last days away on the run


CHORUS x 2

3rd Verse:

Sun going strange
Earth climate change
Perched on extreme game
Birds came early
Violent rain flurry
Hurry off to higher ground
Black seas rise
Did you hear that sound?
See that sky?
Maney(crazy) before dark
Techno advance
Google search HAARP
Tectonic dance
Google search richter
Put the words together see the Haitian picture
Chile picture
Chinese picture
Contracts fly
Suit & ties get richer
Revelation scripture
Sign of the times
Let unity divine
Free Palestine


CHORUS

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Re: Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?
« Reply #26 on: February 17, 2012, 02:42:47 PM »
Wow that was good, going on my ipod asap