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Short Flash 93 presentation

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Bo:
In the process of creating this flash presentation ,I didn't knew much about flight 93 so I had to do my homework about it and my knowledge about flight 93 increased greatly, I realized that when mixing knowledge with something creative it becomes so much more freaking fun to read and learn!





http://criticalmind.angelfire.com/flight93.html               a temporary place where I could upload it(I could not find any other place), there is a chance that they will shut down this page after some traffic.


so what do you guys  think?

I can still changes many things if requested.





a note:
* at the long quotes you can see some errors between spaces, sadly I don't know how to fix that, if I do some words appear outside the movie, anyone with a suggestion about that is appreciated(mail me) but nevertheless you can read it perfectly.

*
replaced ''the end'' with ''Face Reality''
(thanks to the feedback from Zadius_Sky)

Ruth:
That was excellent!!  I like the way you get a plug in for SOTT at the end.

If you can, you might like to change the word "plain" to "plane" in "what a crash sites looks like". :)

Approaching Infinity:
I think that since you quoted McGowan, you should put a link to his site at the end. Other than that, it's pretty slick!

anart:
I agree with the recommendations so far - and good job!  As you make the tweaks, it might be worth it to slow down the pages with long quotes - meaning just linger a second or two longer there for people who read more slowly and who also want to look at the image  - that's all I can add at the moment.  =)

Peto:

--- Quote from: Ruth ---That was excellent!!  I like the way you get a plug in for SOTT at the end.

If you can, you might like to change the word "plain" to "plane" in "what a crash sites looks like". :)
--- End quote ---
I think Adam meant "normal" by the word "plain". If that's the case, "Normal crash sites look like this" would be more easily understood.

Other than that, I agree that the flash is very good. Well done!

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