A Poem

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I wrote this tonight and wanted to share it. Couldn't think of a title for it though...
Here it goes...


Letting Go


We are all victims of our pride,
With our backs up against the wall,
We yearn for freedom
But freedom comes with a price.
Casting out our inhibitions and lust,
Letting go of hate and sorrow,
Leaving it behind for a better tomorrow.
Get rid of your ego and envy,
The death of the false self is not an ending.
To reach a new beginning and a brighter day,
Letting go of our masks is the way.



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beautiful poem Deedlet!
it breathes truth into the present human situation
keep em' comin
 
Deedlet said:
Letting Go


We are all victims of our pride,
With our backs up against the wall,
We yearn for freedom
But freedom comes with a price.
Casting out our inhibitions and lust,
Letting go of hate and sorrow,
Leaving it behind for a better tomorrow.
Get rid of your ego and envy,
The death of the false self is not an ending.
To reach a new beginning and a brighter day,
Letting go of our masks is the way.
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Deedlet said:
I think if I was them though.. I would have stayed in the cellar with all the food and fought to protect that place till the end. That place was like a gold mine...
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Deedlet,

Reading these two posts leaves me with mixed signals. I'm having trouble reconciling something, can you help me out?
 
Azur said:
Deedlet said:
Letting Go


We are all victims of our pride,
With our backs up against the wall,
We yearn for freedom
But freedom comes with a price.
Casting out our inhibitions and lust,
Letting go of hate and sorrow,
Leaving it behind for a better tomorrow.
Get rid of your ego and envy,
The death of the false self is not an ending.
To reach a new beginning and a brighter day,
Letting go of our masks is the way.
Click to expand...

Deedlet said:
I think if I was them though.. I would have stayed in the cellar with all the food and fought to protect that place till the end. That place was like a gold mine...
Click to expand...


Deedlet,

Reading these two posts leaves me with mixed signals. I'm having trouble reconciling something, can you help me out?
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Sure what's up?
 
A new poem I wrote last night :)


The Day of Days

Walking down the road of life,

Trying to figure out what is right.

I try my hardest to see the truth,

But everywhere I go it’s the same ol lies

I’m tired of hearing all these lies

I’ve had enough of all the deceit you organize.

And maybe I’m just not strong enough

To face the malice you systematize

But it won’t always be that way, you’ll see!

Because I’m not alone in what I see

And one day my friends and I will hold the light

And we will cover the darkness of your lies.

And that day will be a glorious day!

The day of souls! The day of days!
 
I really liked the second one alot! You should post more poetry, it'd be nice to see a lot more activity in this thread.
 
Atreides said:
I really liked the second one alot! You should post more poetry, it'd be nice to see a lot more activity in this thread.
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Thanks Atreides, I've been kind of busy lately but I will try to write some stuff soon and update this thread. You're giving me fuel of creativity with your own poems so keep em' coming too! ;)
 
New poem I wrote,

Endless


Endless…

Soul is the only thing that matters

Can’t you see?

Oh you must see…

Reach for the stars…

That day,

When I saw you by the sea,

I asked you can’t you see?

Reach for the stars…

Soul is the only thing that matters,

Oh can’t you see?

Look deep inside…

That day, by the sea,

I asked you to see...

It’s time for change,

Not just for you and me,

For everyone…

We looked at the stars, looked at the moon and constellations above,

I told you one day, our souls will unite within the stars and infinity

I asked you can’t you see?

You said give me time.
 
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