culture

[joejoeba]

Culture

Life on a sprout.
I am a sprout:
Nutty, wet, and packed
with life's life in a sprout.

 

[Nathan]

Huh?

 

[knowledge_of_self]

I must admit that I am also perplexed with this poem?riddle?statement?

what is it exactly?

 

[joejoeba]

potential

 

[Tigersoap]

potential

Yeah looks like you've got potential to go to the nuthouse

;)
:P

 

[joejoeba]

life is emergent; where it can it will.

 

[Nathan]

Hi Joe,

Now I understand your poem better.

Did you mean "Life of a sprout"? I found your second line, "I am a sprout" more profound. You probably don't need the first line, your poem is strong enough without it.
The use of "sprout" three times and "life" three times made me stumble a bit, finding the meaning of the poem hard to grasp, hence my "Huh?".
Nutty? I don't understand what you mean by that? Maybe because I'm nutty myself? :P

You said "potential". You could use that in your last line. "With life's potential in a sprout".

Cute poem, I like it.

 

[joejoeba]

Ok I'l try it.......

I am a sprout:
Nutty, wet, and packed
with life's potential in a sprout.

(Life on a sprout referred to our little green and blue planet)

Welcome to try any more suggestions to make this as true to itself as possible!!

 

[vinny]

with life's potential in a sprout.

(Life on a sprout referred to our little green and blue planet)

aha! lightbulb moment ;)

 

[joejoeba]

location,life, potential.