Hello Laura, all
I’d like to share a few thoughts and questions regarding the piece about the history of the Franks, and also regarding my own reaction in handling those questions.
While working on the proofreading of the French translation of the wave book four, in the part pertaining to the history of the franks (chapter 32), I noticed a name substitution in the French version from the original English text. (The French version mentions a contact / fusion between the Frisian tribe and the Hattuarii tribe, while the original version mentions it between the Frisian tribe and the Chatti tribe).
Since the substitution was repeated (4 times) and consistent, I wondered if the initial translator had noticed a mistake and corrected it, and in order to clarify this, I checked the sources (Plinus the Elder and Tacitus). I found a French translation for each, with references to the Latin name, and the result I found was, unexpectedly, a third different tribe : the Chauci tribe !
I must also add that I already worked on this part while working on the French translation of 9/11, but since no substitution took place with that translation, I didn’t notice the point and didn’t investigate the Roman references.
I’d also like to make clear this doesn’t mean that the Chatti / Hittite connexion is not relevant here, because some historians include Chatti in the Frankish coalition anyway, and all those names are close enough (and confused enough both in time and space due to moving reality of Germanic tribes at the time, and perhaps to the limited understanding by Roman sources of the dynamics of German tribes outside the Empire : Tacitus and Plinus descriptions of the Chauci are completely opposite, Tacitus describing a proud and powerful tribe, while Plinus described a helpless and miserable people), but following the thread leading to this connexion gave me a real hard time and it’s not over yet. I’m still struggling to get a general idea of this mess of tribes through those troubled ages.
Perhaps what is lacking for me to make these connexions is an access to the archaeological data and the works of Kerst Huisman, mentioned in this chapter, but I could only find some of those online in the Frisian language, which I can’t understand !
So my question is : do you think digging deeper into this piece of history is part of the job of proofreading, or is it mostly a waste of time due to some programs of mine (perfectionist program for instance) ?
Now thinking of this question led me to observe my inner reactions, which I think I should also share here too.
First, the reasons I see to go deeper into this : as far as I’m concerned, digging like this is something I find very exciting. My deep feeling about it is that I am really doing some share of struggling to uncover the Truth and see things as they really are, and I really enjoy doing all this difficult searches for old references and learning so much searching around for clues. My sentiment is one of harmony between the general aim of the activity (helping others gets the knowledge in their available language) and the intellectual satisfaction of piecing the puzzle together. This is an harmony I no longer find in my professional activity, where the general aim of the activity (cost cutting and ever-growing profits for the shareholders at the expense of the customers) is essentially in conflict with my own views, and no amount of intellectual satisfaction can make this disappear.
When I speak of the intellectual satisfaction of piecing the puzzle together, perhaps I should describe a bit more the way it feels : it starts with my being really uncomfortable with a reasoning I can’t understand, and checking the sources and the validity of the reasoning seems the right thing to do, science-wise. One of the temptation is too discard it altogether, but I have also learned from previous translation work of this material that the connexions are surprisingly relevant, even if hard to catch at first sight. But that in itself is probably not enough to spend a lot of time sorting out one tiny sentence in the whole chapter.
However, when future readers are taken into account, I think checking the facts, clarifying the difficult steps of the reasoning and avoiding mistakes can help a lot : preventing open readers from discarding the information as too difficult or erroneous (however partly) is a service to them, and the idea of proposing yhem raw data with a lot to sort out on their own makes me feel a bit like a fraud. I feel it’s against basic honesty.
Now the reason I can see to stop right now and go on with the proofreading, without additional research on the tribes :
This drive to dig deeper could well be a “perfectionist” program of mine, an incapacity to focus on the larger view and to let go minor details. My scientific education is screaming the other way (“the devil is in the details”, “consistency matters”, and so on…), and I tend to value it because it was a real hard work for me to learn scientific rigor. But at the same time, since this “set of scientific values” was so foreign to me in the first place, and is the result of years of conditioning, I can’t trust my objectivity in deciding this, and that’s why I have these doubts regarding the time I should spend on this.
And, last but not least, just by doing this self-observation, I may just be spotting another program of mine : sharing my feeling that this chapter is difficult to follow, or that the way the reasoning is presented is not quite clear to me, is something that makes me ill-at-ease. What I suspect here is the predator's mind involved. It may well be the main reason why I thought going on with it could be a waste of time: a “rather put it under the rug than show that this part is difficult for me, or worse, than appear to be critical (even if in a positive way, or so I hope) on non-essential matters” program.
So here again, I don’t trust my own objectivity in these matters, so I guess I could use a little feedback on it too (before posting this, I had this inner talking going on and on endlessly, with no way to reach a conclusion or course of action. Doing some pipe breathing was helping in calming this inner talking down, but not really conclusive as to what course of action to take).
Thanks a lot and regards.
I’d like to share a few thoughts and questions regarding the piece about the history of the Franks, and also regarding my own reaction in handling those questions.
While working on the proofreading of the French translation of the wave book four, in the part pertaining to the history of the franks (chapter 32), I noticed a name substitution in the French version from the original English text. (The French version mentions a contact / fusion between the Frisian tribe and the Hattuarii tribe, while the original version mentions it between the Frisian tribe and the Chatti tribe).
Since the substitution was repeated (4 times) and consistent, I wondered if the initial translator had noticed a mistake and corrected it, and in order to clarify this, I checked the sources (Plinus the Elder and Tacitus). I found a French translation for each, with references to the Latin name, and the result I found was, unexpectedly, a third different tribe : the Chauci tribe !
I must also add that I already worked on this part while working on the French translation of 9/11, but since no substitution took place with that translation, I didn’t notice the point and didn’t investigate the Roman references.
I’d also like to make clear this doesn’t mean that the Chatti / Hittite connexion is not relevant here, because some historians include Chatti in the Frankish coalition anyway, and all those names are close enough (and confused enough both in time and space due to moving reality of Germanic tribes at the time, and perhaps to the limited understanding by Roman sources of the dynamics of German tribes outside the Empire : Tacitus and Plinus descriptions of the Chauci are completely opposite, Tacitus describing a proud and powerful tribe, while Plinus described a helpless and miserable people), but following the thread leading to this connexion gave me a real hard time and it’s not over yet. I’m still struggling to get a general idea of this mess of tribes through those troubled ages.
Perhaps what is lacking for me to make these connexions is an access to the archaeological data and the works of Kerst Huisman, mentioned in this chapter, but I could only find some of those online in the Frisian language, which I can’t understand !
So my question is : do you think digging deeper into this piece of history is part of the job of proofreading, or is it mostly a waste of time due to some programs of mine (perfectionist program for instance) ?
Now thinking of this question led me to observe my inner reactions, which I think I should also share here too.
First, the reasons I see to go deeper into this : as far as I’m concerned, digging like this is something I find very exciting. My deep feeling about it is that I am really doing some share of struggling to uncover the Truth and see things as they really are, and I really enjoy doing all this difficult searches for old references and learning so much searching around for clues. My sentiment is one of harmony between the general aim of the activity (helping others gets the knowledge in their available language) and the intellectual satisfaction of piecing the puzzle together. This is an harmony I no longer find in my professional activity, where the general aim of the activity (cost cutting and ever-growing profits for the shareholders at the expense of the customers) is essentially in conflict with my own views, and no amount of intellectual satisfaction can make this disappear.
When I speak of the intellectual satisfaction of piecing the puzzle together, perhaps I should describe a bit more the way it feels : it starts with my being really uncomfortable with a reasoning I can’t understand, and checking the sources and the validity of the reasoning seems the right thing to do, science-wise. One of the temptation is too discard it altogether, but I have also learned from previous translation work of this material that the connexions are surprisingly relevant, even if hard to catch at first sight. But that in itself is probably not enough to spend a lot of time sorting out one tiny sentence in the whole chapter.
However, when future readers are taken into account, I think checking the facts, clarifying the difficult steps of the reasoning and avoiding mistakes can help a lot : preventing open readers from discarding the information as too difficult or erroneous (however partly) is a service to them, and the idea of proposing yhem raw data with a lot to sort out on their own makes me feel a bit like a fraud. I feel it’s against basic honesty.
Now the reason I can see to stop right now and go on with the proofreading, without additional research on the tribes :
This drive to dig deeper could well be a “perfectionist” program of mine, an incapacity to focus on the larger view and to let go minor details. My scientific education is screaming the other way (“the devil is in the details”, “consistency matters”, and so on…), and I tend to value it because it was a real hard work for me to learn scientific rigor. But at the same time, since this “set of scientific values” was so foreign to me in the first place, and is the result of years of conditioning, I can’t trust my objectivity in deciding this, and that’s why I have these doubts regarding the time I should spend on this.
And, last but not least, just by doing this self-observation, I may just be spotting another program of mine : sharing my feeling that this chapter is difficult to follow, or that the way the reasoning is presented is not quite clear to me, is something that makes me ill-at-ease. What I suspect here is the predator's mind involved. It may well be the main reason why I thought going on with it could be a waste of time: a “rather put it under the rug than show that this part is difficult for me, or worse, than appear to be critical (even if in a positive way, or so I hope) on non-essential matters” program.
So here again, I don’t trust my own objectivity in these matters, so I guess I could use a little feedback on it too (before posting this, I had this inner talking going on and on endlessly, with no way to reach a conclusion or course of action. Doing some pipe breathing was helping in calming this inner talking down, but not really conclusive as to what course of action to take).
Thanks a lot and regards.