Light on the Way

I'm more of an analytical/logical person by nature, thus I categorize myself as being more closely aligned with that of Man 3 as described by Mouravieff. Thus, in an attempt to somehow "awaken" my emotional center more, I have attempted to write something resembling poetry. A "rookie's" simple interpretation of how light as knowledge may be transmitted to the "sleeping" Adamic race ;D:

Raining sunshine on stormy clouds,
Lighting whispers to nature's wind,
Illuminating a vortex among the fog- the lot of thought within sleeping men

Perturbing Ariadne within dreamers
Exposing false threads among the hulls,
Capsizing man's dogma - his wishful ships of lull

Vibrating Mixtus Orbis- Gaia's domain of twisted mirth
Offering the heavens, if only in potential, to her fearful birth
Resonating, in scale, to heart’s collective reason – Adamic’s emotional symphony in sum

Giving insight to lonely queries- a yearning for Love attained,
Assisting in assimilating knowledge and understanding - a savoir-faire sway,
Helping to discern influence, the white among Mixtus' grey, hoping that in each free movement is a step closer to finding the Way.
 
cool...nice work!

I relatively recently wrote a song also called Lights on the Way, u can hear it here - www.myspace.com/whatliesinsideband

here are the lyrics

LIGHTS ON THE WAY


I am aware, that I am aware.
Subtle the seed, divided are we.
Lost in the lie, a call to defy.

I need, I am not real. I feel, that they cannot see.

Find yourself a new direction.

Lies bring you down.

Show me your animal
What hides inside
Show me how
To be all I want to be
Secrets to tell

Mechanical…………..it’s more than a name………………....your reward….

Burn it down, with the truth you’ve found, effectuate, your soul innate.

Mine is to bare, the lioness stair
Humble indeed, a warrior sees
More than my eye, distortions of light
Burning to free, the iron in me
Life is to know, the spiraling show

I need, I am not real. I feel, that they cannot see.

What do you see?

Lies bring you down

Show me the mystery
Filled with intrigue
Show me how
To break my reality
Survive this hell

that burns in me…………there’s no-one to blame………………this charade.

Burn it down, with the truth you’ve found, effectuate, your soul innate.


The odious task of a destitute mind, the repugnant machine with all its gears flung swiftly in reverse. Sathanael the innate, holding the circle in place. In everything there is purpose, whether we can see it or not. To escape is to find gnosis, to put to work our saviour faire and break into the insomniable truth. For those that are called, have faith in yourself and look for the lights on the way.

Find yourself a new direction.

Lies bring you down.


Take me through history
In your past life
Show me this
Mythical magical
World that is ours

a violent surge…………..let harmony reign………………...cut the chord.….

Burn it down, with the truth you’ve found, effectuate, your soul innate.

June 2006
 
Yes, nice work. Quite unique and popular sound on the gutairs. I would cut the soft intro and come right in with the bam bam....bam bam... then the voice kicks in. Just an idea. :cool2:
 
I've uploaded some photos at the following link which seem to go well with your poem.


Cheers,


Avi


http://www.flickr.com/photos/leoursa/sets/72157613685178408/show/
 
I really like your poem, seeking the truth. I like the words you've chosen and the pattern of the poem. It conjures up a mystical mood in me!
 
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