Ms. Earth meets another inhabited planet

[Faith]

Hello everyone :)

While I was thinking about the articles “Paradise Lost” and “The Vegetarian Myth” I got an idea of an image. I guess you need to be logged in to see it.

Ms. Earth meets another inhabited planet, who looks worried when he asks: “Look at you! Did you shave your head? What happened?” - “No, I didn't. I'm suffering from agriculture, late stages. My humanoid cultures have completely degraded. The doctor recommended that I should try truth pills for a while, you know, those red ones and if that doesn't help chemo would be in order” - “Poor thing! What procedures exactly?” - “Comet treatment, seismic shock therapy, water bath treatment, radiation therapy,... It is true it would be damn awful for quite some time but in the long run the chances of a cure are promising, he said.” - “I hope those red pills do the trick. Get well soon!”

I'm not sure if it works. But I intend to improve it if it doesn't. What do you think?

 

[Faith]

:) Here is a little update. I simplified the idea. Putting earth changes on the same level as chemo therapy is a poor comparison. Nature is wise and can't be compared to those scientists, who lack a proper understanding, who are blind to the needs of their patiens and who are enslaved to profit. That's what this kind of warfare-sort of therapy stand for. I also reduced the amount of text and tried to focus on the idea, that the planet has become sick and the proper treatment is the truth, in that case the truth about agriculture that destroys ecosystems. I'm not sure if it works better now. Communicating certain concepts in the right way is not easy. However, I leave it that way. There are other ideas and approaches I like to explore. :P

EDIT: I rephrased a sentence

 

[Janis Schmidt]

How old are you, Jedi? I am very captivated with your idea. I think it's great. Without changing the plot, or your idea, perhaps you could put the Earth a little more in charge. Maybe introduce the Pharmaceutical as prescribing more pesticides, drugs, and war. "which I have tried to no avail, and I feel like I am burning up, and soon to explode." (natural diasters) Nature will alway seek a balance for the cure. Really love your little story.

Janis

 

[Beau]

How old are you, Jedi?

I'm not sure how forget-me-not's age is relevant. Is there a reason you are asking a personal question like that?