Poem 2.. I am starting to quite enjoy the literary aspect of this.

[Weontv]

Sometimes as a child I would dream awake
I now realize the things I saw must have been fate
There is more to reality, than these false dichotomies
Endless propoganda and brainwashing lobotomies
Its all false fidelity to produce negativity
Steer your mind away from experienced objectivity
They turn us against each other, purposeless hostility
School promoting cookie-cutter intellectual ability

The truth is unveiled in layers, and the layers stopped peeling
To anyone who went through this skewed information dealing
They stop our progression with external distraction
This reality induces no introspection or recapitulation
Without the spiritual key, and cosmic implication
You'll cease to have perspective into the entire creation

Light, Thought, math and information
Each is all and create our manifestation
Its all just energy, mathematical Implementation
Energy and consciousness is an explosive reaction.
Perception creates reality, its all a fabrication
The grand illusion, mind and material fusion

People may be skeptical, this is very susceptible
Its not all accesible, disbelief is acceptable
Just have an open mind, it's real suggestible
You can also act as a cosmic receptactle
The truth wades in water's that are unconventional
In rivers of knowledge considered unprofessional

Compassion and intellect produce wisdom
The lesson and illusion is the mind and heart schism
We are all the same being, fractalized consciousness
The revelation you will learn is that variety is bliss
Each path offers continued learning, You are here by choice
Peel off the layers of illusion and finally you'll rejoice

This may be offensive, The context is abbrasive
The matrix can be extremely persuasive
You will recoil at the thought of changing your paradigm
You will have experiences that will make you terrified
But until you've fought dragons on different planes
Until you've felt the burning pain of their games
Walked with angels, Talked to gods, and heard your real name
Observed your real origins, digested all of the frame
Your perception and experience are based off what you've ingested
And in all honesty, it is most likely congested
Be true to yourself and never subscribe to your feelings
Because the sick reality is your thoughts are skewed by "demons"




Just felt like sharing.. Thanks!


mod: Implemenation changed to Implementation

 

[Xico]

this is really good, congratulations!!

 

[Thebull]

I enjoyed reading this

 

[Weontv]

:O I just noticed I put implemenation instead of implementation. There is no way to edit this is there?

 

[Palinurus]

Hi Weontv,

You receive the privilege of being able to edit your posts as soon as you have posted the minimum of fifty (50) contributions and even then you're allowed only thirty (30) minutes to actually do so counting from the time stamp of the post itself.

As you don't have reached this number as of yet, the proper work-around would be to ask a moderator, ambassador or administrator to make the correction for you.

You can use the button Report to moderator within the post (bottom right) to file that request. You have to be logged-in to be able to do so.

Hope this helps a bit. :)

P.S. I enjoyed reading your poem very much but spotted the typo right away. It's like a fly in the ointment as they say.