Prayer of The Soul in a Rap Song?

[FlyChi]

Check the chorus on this one:

http://soundcloud.com/pitchblackgold/shift


1st Verse:

Twin sun gravity gunshots begun
Power of slugs
See 'em approach as one
Nowhere to run
3 weeks soon come
Fate up in our face
Who will feed the forked tongue
Decisions are overdue
Judgement is daily
Future ain't written
Prophecies are maybes
Possible timelines
Unwritten dealings
Revelations given to prevent self fulfilling
The last days of an age inside the maze
Sing freedom break bars and escape the maze
Machine feel the rage of humanity
Condemned by political men wearing the mask of sanity
Streets with profanity
Task is enormous
Slash through the tyranny
Embrace what's before us
Galaxy adores us
Choice in our palms
Either perish on our knees or evolve beyond

Chorus:

You can see it in the streets/Feel it in the air
Feel it within/Let it begin and shift...

Clear my eyes so I can see.....and shift
Clear my ears so I can hear.....and shift
Cleanse my heart so I can know and love
Flow from above/ Flight like a dove


.....yes it is my recording ;)

 

[Muxel]

Whoa I wasn't expecting it to be this good. I'll be listening to it several more times. Great job with the lyrics by the way!

 

[Franco]

Well I liked it, nice production. How long have you been producing music?

 

[Gawan]

Nice beat! :)

 

[Tomek]

That was... surprisingly good ! Nice job !

 

[Aiming]

Really good, FlyChi! :)

I knew that rap had potential..

 

[knowledge_of_self]

That was excellent! Good job! It's hard to find good rap now days. I really enjoyed it.

 

[DHTH]

Nice, It was good. liked it

talent

 

[Tempus Fugit]

Well done!

 

[Bar Kochba]

I enjoyed this. Good work!

 

[3DStudent]

Very nice, I liked it! It's good to hear some rap that has positive vocals. Thanks for sharing.

 

[FlyChi]

Thanx all,

I'm just getting back into consistently recording after about a 10 year hiatus. Released an album in 2002, did a lot of traveling globally, decided to move to Bali. Due to limited studio access I never got into a flow of recording where I could drop another project. I would make songs here and there, but that's about it. Never stopped writing though and finally I'm connecting with folks who are down to put the proper time in. It's good to be creating songs again.

Thanks for the feedback, I very much appreciate it.

 

[Voyageur]

...It's good to be creating songs again.

Interesting beat and lyrics FlyChi

 

[ashu]

Very nice FlyChi

 

[FlyChi]

Here's live practice of a piano version of the song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9f6WtM52dc&list=UUhm9l9zIBwsqMiI_i_kTeZw&index=1&feature=plcp