Predator (poem)

Nathan

Nathan

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The recent blitz of poetry has inspired me also. :) This one concerns the Predator's Mind.

It is the addiction I adore
It is the need I have for more
It is the lie that I consume
It is my saviour, it is my womb

It is the voice inside my head
It is the seduction in my bed
It is the sex that I crave
It is the master, I am the slave

It is the hate from within
It is denial, fear and sin
It is my Pandora's box of lies
It is my unforeseen demise

It is a leech in my mind
It is my vampire for the blind
It is the sedation of my will
It is the contradiction I want to kill

It is my fragile ego, it is my trust
It is my system of belief, it is my lust
It is what chains me to the wall
It is my prison, it is my fall.
 
Great poem Nathan. What about penning one on the "real I"? Just for contrast!

Joe
 
It is very good, thumbs up Nathan, I like poetry that is right to the point


more reflections on Predator... its actually great track for sprinting because of its beat but listening to the lyrics always makes me think of predator's mind:

Firestarter
Im the trouble starter, fuckin instigator.
Im the fear addicted, danger illustrated.

Im a firestarter, twisted firestarter.
Youre the firestarter, twisted firestarter.
Im a firestarter, twisted firestarter.

Im the bitch you hated, filth infatuated.
Yeah. Im the pain you tasted, fell intoxicated.

Im a firestarter, twisted firestarter.
Youre the firestarter, twisted firestarter.

Im the self inflicted, mind detonator.
Yeah. Im the one infected, twisted animator.

Im a firestarter, twisted firestarter.
Youre the firestarter, twisted firestarter.
Im a firestarter, twisted firestarter... starter... starter...
Starter...


and he acts it really well in the video __http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=28ow4TLMTqM
 
I've had this 'Real I' poem lying around for a while now; I was never quite happy with it. But here it is anyway! :)

To bleed the edge of what was you and truly see
To abandon all your trying to do and firstly be
To forge the steward within that you can’t live without
To feel the ache of those who cling to chains and chance of getting out
To tread the broken soul and mend your severed string
To tell apart those who can and can’t feel anything
To cast aside beliefs and walk the thread of open doors
To suffocate inflated head and crawl the iron floors

To look on as heroes destroy the world with blades of peace
To not be fooled by wolves who wander streets in perfect fleece
To withdraw from ashen wings of hollow gods and holy lies
To hold your own amongst a sea of conflicting I’s
To find the child inside and hold its waking hand
To burn the curtain, cut the strings and finally make a stand
 
You might be thinking of "Self-Destruct", which is somewhere in-between the Predator poem and the Firestarter lyrics:

i am the truth from which you run and i control you
i am the silencing machine and i control you
i am the end of all your dreams and i control you
i take you where you want to go
i give you all you need to know
i drag you down i use you up
mr self destruct
Click to expand...
 
Nathan said:
You might be thinking of "Self-Destruct", which is somewhere in-between the Predator poem and the Firestarter lyrics:

i am the truth from which you run and i control you
i am the silencing machine and i control you
i am the end of all your dreams and i control you
i take you where you want to go
i give you all you need to know
i drag you down i use you up
mr self destruct
Click to expand...
Click to expand...

Yep, that's the one.
 
i like it so much nathan, very ingenious rhymes. I think that its a perfect lyric for a song, maybe we could try to write one. :)
 
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