Errors in "The Wave" (Online Version)

Chapter 20:

1.
As a slight diversion, I want to suggest that the reader consider this issue of “cults” more closely, by reading an article on the website by Joe Quinn called “Cult-ivating Terror”, which is included here as an appendix
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It seems Joe's article has not been transferred to the new site. Would it make sense to delete the 'appendinx' part of the sentence after the coma and add a link to the article instead? It's here: http://www.cassiopaea.org/cass/cult-ivating_terror.htm

2. (next pagragraph) raison d’être --> raison d'être (or: raison d'etre, if there is a problem with diacritics);
the same para: "work domake them worthy" --> do make
 
http://cassiopaea.org/2012/03/14/the-wave-chapter-64-crossing-the-threshold/
The coil is able to store electrical energy within the magnetic filed generated.
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http://cassiopaea.org/2012/03/24/the-wave-chapter-68-as-above-so-below/
But it the evidence shows that higher-density beings are not so constrained
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and
September 24, 1999
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the session date should be 1995, i think


http://cassiopaea.org/2012/03/25/the-wave-chapter-69-the-whirlpool-of-charybdis-the-sirens-and-the-navigator/
Liky Ulysses, we must lash ourselves to the mast of our ship
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and
prepared to find by virtue of is already laid circuits
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1) http://cassiopaea.org/2011/02/12/the-wave-chapter-31-the-priory-of-sion-and-the-shepherds-of-arcadia/wave4image1-2/
404 — File not found.

2) chapter 29, 30, 31..
Some problems with letters:

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Patrick Rivière
Rennes-le-Château
M. de Sède
Bérenger Saunière
 
In Chapter 29: "The Dream" from Amazing Grace:

Just before the dream entry:

Day after day, week after week, I poured through the books, examining every face in every photograph, ever withered and emaciated limb, every haunted pair of eyes, every tender and precious babe, child, husband, wife, parent, tossed in heaps like so much cordwood for the furnaces of Eastern Europe. Page after page I turned, reading stories, personal accounts of horrors too dreadful to be spoken aloud, much less committed to writing. And as I moved through it, the horror mounted inside me like a volcano building up to explode. I realized that I was looking for a face. Not just any face. But I face I would know.
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Should it be: "But the face I would know."
 
Hi,
I have spotted some errors in the printed version of "Debugging The Universe." Should I post them here or is there somewhere else to post them since the title of this thread is "Online Version"?
 
Don Genaro said:
Hi,
I have spotted some errors in the printed version of "Debugging The Universe." Should I post them here or is there somewhere else to post them since the title of this thread is "Online Version"?
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Post them here, since the print version was used for the online one. And that way, we can fix it for any future print runs.
 
Palinurus said:
Zadius Sky said:
Should it be: "But the face I would know."
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After rereading the passage I'm inclined to think that "...a face..." would be more probable. fwiw.
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Thanks, that should be right ("a" than "the"). I'm not that strong with grammar.

I've meant to input the link in my last post:
http://cassiopaea.org/2011/11/19/chapter-twenty-nine-the-dream/
 
Okay so here are the errors I’ve noted in the print version of Debugging the Universe:

Page 54: “and worse still, he was hitting on my daughter.” (8 lines from the bottom). Missing "was."

Page 55: “over feet and a half feet tall.” (5 lines from the top). Should be "6,7,8,15?" :D

Page 88: “yours progress” (about half way down the page)
also, the sentence that comes almost immediately afterwards on page 88 is a little confusing: “Then, think about the process of separating limiting emotions based on assumptions from those that limit, and the fact that this opens one to unlimited possibilities…”

Page 117: “They will not even be able to identify and initiate…” (line 6) Should be "an."

Page 121: “It is less than on hundred years… (line 14). Should be "one."
and further down, same page: “No, you set out the follow the Way of the Fool” (line 26). Should be "to."

Page 125: “It is clear that a huge segment of our society” (line 7). Missing "of."

Page 131: “But it the evidence shows…” (2nd last line). "It" not needed.

Page 135: “they have been using the particular bracketed period of the 74 thousand year period to alter things…” (line 19)
(missing "to")

Page 150: “Neandertals” (5th line from bottom). Should be "Neanderthals."

Page 159: “in the positive realms the the (mode)…” (line 5).

Page 174: “Deepok Chopra” (3rd line from bottom) Should be "Deepak."
 
Hey guys, I just noticed that the French on-line version of the Wave is not up: http://fr.cassiopaea.org/
Other languages do seem to be working.
 
http://cassiopaea.org/2010/05/18/the-wave-chapter-27-stripped-to-the-bone-the-shamanic-initiation-of-the-knighted-ones-technicians-of-ecstasy/

I noticed two typos where Laura speaks about Ark meeting with Henri Tracol, one of Gurdjieff’s students, in Marseilles back in July of 1986.
The quoted journal entries have wrong year in both parts.

Marseilles, July 21, 1966
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and
July 23, 1996
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Seppo Ilmarinen said:
http://cassiopaea.org/2010/05/18/the-wave-chapter-27-stripped-to-the-bone-the-shamanic-initiation-of-the-knighted-ones-technicians-of-ecstasy/

I noticed two typos where Laura speaks about Ark meeting with Henri Tracol, one of Gurdjieff’s students, in Marseilles back in July of 1986.
The quoted journal entries have wrong year in both parts.

Marseilles, July 21, 1966
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July 23, 1996
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in the same chapter, after extensive quotation from ISOM. We find the following paragraph:

During the sixteenth, seventeenth, and eighteenth centuries a considerable number of alchemical adepts traveled around Europe, appearing and disappearing at will. According to tradition, these adepts were immortal and kept themselves alive by means of the Elixir of Life, which was one of the goals of alchemy. That such mysterious men did exist there can be little doubt, as their presence is attested to by scores of reliable witnesses.
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This paragraph is a synopsis of a paragraph of the book "The Secret Teachings of All Ages" by Manly P. Hall:

During the sixteenth, seventeenth, and eighteenth centuries a considerable number of alchemical adepts made their way from place to place throughout Europe, appearing and disappearing apparently at will. According to popular tradition, these adepts were immortal, and kept themselves alive by means of the mysterious medicine that was one of the goals of alchemical aspiration. It is asserted that some lived hundreds of years, taking no food except this elixir, a few drops of which would preserve their youth for a long period of time. That such mysterious men did exist there can be little doubt, as their presence is attested by scores of reliable witnesses.
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There have been an oversight and has not been quoted so that seems that is Laura who speaks these words and not Manly P. Hall.
 
In Chapter 15, footnote 4:
http://cassiopaea.org/2010/05/12/the-wave-chapter-15-all-there-is-is-lessons-or-he-hideth-my-soul-in-the-cleft-of-the-rock/#sdfootnote4sym

We call the program Éiriú Eolas, which is Celtic for “Growth of Knowledge”.
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