Buddy said:Laura said:...if you can make it droll and engaging at the same time, you will be doing a great service!
Laura, in the meantime, can you link a piece of writing that might be a good or best example of the kind of droll and engaging you have in mind? If so, and if I can learn to write like that, then maybe I could write (or help write) some reviews and summaries that people might enjoy reading.
Just read the new book. I've dealt with some very complex issues there and certainly did struggle to find the way to write about them in ways that are clear enough that about anybody can get it. Chapter nine, in particular, took some pacing and thinking and writing over and over in the head to be able to articulate those ideas. And there are more coming up. See the excerpt I've included above.
One thing I try to do is avoid jargon that makes a sentence incomprehensible. Take the following, for example, from AI's summary:
Nagel begins by pointing out the extensive implications of the mind-body problem (i.e., the apparent division between mind and matter, and the nature of their relationship). Not only is it 'local', in the sense of trying to explain what exactly 'minds' are and how they relate to bodies (is mind an illusion? an epiphenomenon, or mere product of physical complexity? a nonmaterial thing?); but it also relates to our entire understanding of the cosmos and its history: physical sciences and evolutionary biology should take these philosophical implications into account. The question is: Are our current tools of knowledge sufficient to understand the universe as a whole? To Nagel, the answer is "No." Part of philosophy involves pointing out the limitations of ideas and methods in current use, as the scientists using them often take them for granted. So Nagel's goal as a philosopher here is a "comprehensive, speculative world picture," extrapolating from the physical sciences and trying to unify them in "an explanation of everything in the universe."
The physical sciences take a position of "psychophysical reductionism," i.e., they attempt to 'reduce' the features of mind to the physical parts which allegedly produce mental processes and phenomena. Nagel thinks this position fails to give a sufficient understanding of the world. Nagel favours "neutral monism," which he describes in a later chapter. Some of the facts that a good position must account for: mind's seeming dependence on the appearance of living organism as a result of physical, chemical and biological evolution (no physical body, no mind, as far as we can tell).
I would re-write it thus:
Most people don't realize that they have been taught and influenced to think about the world in ways that are rather like the blinders that are put on a horse to prevent him from seeing anything but the route straight ahead. This is okay as long as the route is safe and there are no surprises. And for some horses it is probably the best thing because their nervous systems can't handle surprises, sudden movements or changes, they are easily distracted and can get out of control. But for a well-disciplined horse that is capable of judging when to move out of the way in case of danger coming from the sides or the rear, blinders can be very detrimental. That discipline can come from the horse itself of a skilled rider/driver. This analogy can only go so far; probably a better one would be a tribe that is born, lives and dies, in a jungle where they never see other humans, know nothing about the rest of the world, think that planes flying overhead are some kind of strange bird or a god, think the earth is flat and the sun is born and dies every day. This last is not too far from reality. But of course, modern humans are convinced that they are all past that now; modern science has solved the major problems and we live in a wide-open universe and our minds are now "opened to the truth". Science tells our cultures what to teach us and thus, we are confident that we are on top of things.
But what if that isn't true? What if our very own modern science made a big mistake somewhere along the way and erected all of its structure on a fundamental concept that seemed pretty reasonable at the time, but evidence keeps piling up saying that there is something really, really wrong at the foundation. But scientists, being ordinary humans raised in the same environment and having authoritarian tendencies like everyone else, really don't like that. They have invested their lives and fortunes, so to say, in the conviction that the foundational assumption is correct and they BELIEVE it in the face of all evidence to the contrary in the same way that a fundamentalist Christian believes that the Bible is the divinely inspired Word of God.
And what is that belief?
Nagel takes us right into the heart of it: it is the Mind-Body problem. In the nineteenth century, French philosopher, Rene Descartes declared that there was a sharp division between the mind and the body. Remember the famous phrase "I think, therefore I am"? Well, that was Descartes. There are scientists nowadays who are referring to this as "Decartes' Error." (Neuroscientist, Antonio Damasio.)
Of course, to Descartes, the fact that he had consciousness was the important thing; it meant that the whole world might be an illusion made up in his mind; the only thing he could know was that he was thinking and knowing stuff. Not only did he declare that the mind had a special status that was not controlled by any physical laws, he also declared that essence of the mind was consciousness: what people think consciously, and nothing more. The important thing here is that the rule was created there and then that the mind is separate from the body and that's that.
This separation of the mind from the body, the "mind-matter" division known as "Cartesian Dualism", had very far reaching implications. Scientists working on strictly material problems came along and said, yeah, Descartes is right but guess what? That thing you call "consciousness" is the thing that doesn't really exist in and of itself, only the material world is real and consciousness is the real illusion! In short, for the materialists, the ONLY thing that was real was the body and the mind was a by-product of cellular communication or the right half of the physical brain signalling the left half, so on and so forth.
Nagel begins by listing some of the most important features and implications of the mind-body problem. He points out that the problem is not only related to what is 'local' to living beings (mainly humans), that is, what the mind really is, how it relates to the body, (is mind an illusion? an symptom or side-effect or product of physical systems or is it truly a nonmaterial thing?); but our conception of mind/body controls our entire understanding of the cosmos and its history. That is, those very early conclusions about this question established by the "Enlightenment scientists" who took Descartes error, reversed it and used it as the foundation for all physical science, affects everything in our understanding of our world. This leads to the big question: Are our current tools of knowledge, based on this fundamental claim that more and more evidence suggests is a huge error, sufficient to understand the universe as a whole? To Nagel, the answer is "No." He then explains that one of the main roles that philosophy plays in our world lies in pointing out the limitations of ideas and methods in current use, as the scientists using them often take them for granted. So Nagel's goal as a philosopher here is a "comprehensive, speculative world picture," extrapolating from the physical sciences and trying to unify them in "an explanation of everything in the universe."
The physical sciences take a position of "psychophysical reductionism," i.e., they attempt to 'reduce' the features of mind to the physical parts which allegedly produce mental processes and phenomena (like cells sending chemical or electrical signals to each other in the process of just doing ordinary "cell stuff" and our brain has transformed that into what it calls "consciousness"). Nagel thinks this position fails to give a sufficient understanding of the world. Nagel himself favours what he calls "neutral monism," which he describes in a later chapter. In general, monism says that the variety of existing things in the universe are reducible to one substance or reality, the fundamental character of the universe is unity. Opposing this point of view is the so-called Cartesian dualism which declares that consciousness and/or mind vs. matter are two ultimately irreconcilable substances or realities which, as we have seen, has then been reduced to an opposing kind of monism, so to say, that which declares that there is only matter, accident, and mind is an illusionary by-product of matter.
Nagel points out, however, that we need to account for the mind's seeming dependence on the appearance of living organisms as a result of physical, chemical and biological evolution (no physical body, no mind, as far as we can tell). ....
As you see, I have made the assumption (correct, as far as I can tell) that MOST people aren't even aware of the most basic scientific and/or philosophical controversies and questions much less the terminology that is used to describe and discuss them. And, since it IS important to the reader to know why this question IS IMPORTANT, one must introduce it, talk about it in a plain way, and build your terms on explanations and examples that get the full meaning across.
In the above, a fuller treatment would give examples from our daily life of how and why this question is important including the tendency to think that psychological issues can just be drugged away, that human beings can be sent out to kill their fellow humans, and then given a pill to help them forget it, that child abuse isn't so important, after all, it's just a meatsack... give 'em a pill, they'll be right as rain! And so forth and so on. It also deprives us of the awareness of our connection with our environment at a level of consciousness that drives the ecological system to either support or reject humanity, and more.