smoke

Thomas Alan

The Living Force
I heard this poem on Garrison Keillor's Writer's Almanac when I was running errands this morning. I thought I would share it. A while back I heard Keillor in another segment lamenting the loss of creativity that has come with the fewer people smoking in our time, how many of the great authors and artists of the past were smokers.

What a huge loss it is, and not an unintentional consequence. Smoking is such a joy for me, a lift yet so relaxing. I intend to enjoy my pipe for a long time to come.

So light up! Hope you enjoy the poem.

Mac

Smoke

by Faith Shearin

It was everywhere in my childhood: in restaurants,
on buses or planes. The teacher's lounge looked like
London under fog. My grandmother never stopped

smoking, and walking in her house was like diving
in a dark pond. Adults were dimly lit: they carried
matches in their pockets as if they might need fire

to see. Cigarette machines inhaled quarters and
exhaled rectangles. Women had their own brands,
long and thin; one was named Eve and it was meant

to be smoked in a garden thick with summer flowers.
I'm speaking of moods: an old country store where
my grandfather met friends and everyone spoke

behind a veil of smoke. (My Uncle Bill preferred
fragrant cigars; I can still smell his postal jacket ...)
He had time to tell stories because he took breaks

and there was something to do with his hands.
My mother's bridge club gathered around tables
with ashtrays and secrets which are best revealed

beside fire. Even the fireplaces are gone: inefficient
and messy. We are healthier now and safer! We have
exercise and tests for breast or colon cancer. We have

helmets and car seats and smokeless coffee shops
where coffee has grown frothy and complex. The old
movies are so full of smoke that actors are hard to see

and they are often wrapped in smoking jackets, bent
over a piano or kiss. I miss the places smoke created.
I like the way people sat down for rest or pleasure

and spoke to other people, not phones, and the tiny fire
which is crimson and primitive and warm. How long
ago when humans found this spark of warmth and made

their first circle? What about smoke as words? Or the
pipes of peace? In grade school we learned how it rises
and how it can kill. We were taught to shove towels

under our closed doors: to stop, drop, and roll. We had
a plan to meet our family in the yard, the house behind
us alive with all we cannot put out...

"Smoke" by Faith Shearin, from The Empty House. © Word Press, 2008. Reprinted with permission. (buy now)
 
It would've been very nice to have experienced a time like that, neat poem :)
 
I read your poem and raise you a song by Nick Drake.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0vzkB8fScIY

Happy coughing.
 
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