Buddy said:
I thought it was the best way to answer the question that I quoted and I obviously thought it was intelligible. 'Scuze me!
To me, it looks like you took the question out of context and then answered it in a way that was intelligible to you, but not really for everyone else. And, of course, obviously you thought it was intelligible--who would post something that they thought didn't make sense? But that doesn't automatically make it make sense.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but it's my current understanding that you have a history of making posts that most people except yourself don't understand (internally considering), then receiving a shock and posting in a way that many/most people can understand (externally considering) for a while, then slowly slipping back into the original posting style that primarily only you can understand, not taking into account the many members of the forum who aren't native english speakers and/or who aren't used to reading highly technical or highly dense information.
Here's the breakdown of my thinking regarding your post:
Buddy said:
Well, the way I see it, one way that psychopathy and characteropathies could be understood to express themselves is through past and present corporate sponsored social engineering projects pushed through schools, TV, movies and other forms of social media.
So you've already lost me here--he was talking about the shift of humanity towards agriculture. So none of this technology was around at that time and there was no corporate sponsorship of social engineering.
Buddy said:
One way to view the payoff could be as the social neutering of the young males and females.
What does this mean?
Buddy said:
Young, athletic, testosterone-driven males with ambition, attention on society, being educated with a deep understanding of our current problems and with desire to make their mark on society are diverted toward endeavors involving narrow context self-gratification loops.
I understand that most people who want to do good (instead of evil) in life are diverted by 4D STS and lack of knowledge into self-gratification and entropy, but I don't really see how the first part of this relates to the second (what does athleticism and testosterone have to do with that? I think most men who are athletic and described as 'testosterone-drive' would be quite uninterested in making a good mark on the world, but more "leaving their mark on the world", which was self-gratification to begin with). Basically, after reading this sentence over multiple times, I don't understand what you're trying to convey, let alone how it relates to what Alvaro posted.
Buddy said:
This behavior can express specifically as a sedentary lifestyle in their local environmental context or a sedentary lifestyle relative to the evolutionary trends of society as a whole.
This I can understand, but from what you've written so far I don't understand your thinking regarding how this relates to Alvaro's question. To me, this looks like an extremely over-complicated way of saying '"humans have been diverted into increasingly STS thinking for a very long time"--which, in the context of this forum, is quite obvious, and so not really adding anything new or insightful.
Buddy said:
Either way, victims are accomplishing few if any long-term values for others.
What victims? What do you mean by "values for others"? I'm guessing that you mean something that is serving others--if so, why did you say it this way?
Buddy said:
Essentially the same with females, I'd say. Except I'd replace 'testosterone-driven' with assertive and gumption-filled.
This I at least don't need to read multiple times, but I still don't understand what you're saying because it relates back to the previous part that I didn't understand.
Buddy said:
For both males and females though, the point here is to notice where people are focusing all their attention.
How does this relate to either what you've been talking about or what Alvaro asked?
Buddy said:
For the most part, its certainly at places other than identifying, exposing and b*tch-slapping certain pathologies back to the primordial soup.
This also took me multiple reads to understand--the use of the word identifying (since it's often used here esoterically, making the meaning quite different) got me stuck, but now I see it clearer. But again, how does this relate back to what Alvaro posted?
I only have my perspective to go on here, but I'm both a native english speaker and have a college education, so I don't have some of the barriers that other members of this forum have--so if I have to read your post multiple times and still don't fully understand it, then to me something is way off and the posting is really all for you (again) and not externally considerate. I don't think it's unreasonable to call it barely intelligible if I'm asking myself "what is he talking about?" the entire time I read a post for the first or second time, in this context.
The entire post seems overly-complicated, favoring dense and complex language over simple and easy to understand language, with unclear or linguistically-far references, not clearly and/or directly related to Alvaro's post, and not written in a way that's trying to make sure that it's understandable to everyone (or at least as many people as can be reasonably expected).
Do you ever read over your posts before posting them and ask yourself "how might this sound to someone who's only had a high school or equivalent education who's not a native english speaker?"?