Breton said:
Tykes said:
Well, encorauged by your kind coments an with no intention of bore or bother you, i would like to show you another song i wrote after the influence of Cassiopaean proyect, it´s just a little silly tune, just me fooling around with the guitars and pop harmonies and trying to put in music and very simple words how i need to DO something, my absolute need to start the Work. I must warn you that my voice tends to sound a little like the Smurfs, i apologize if that results a little annoying for some of you...Uff
ok, as the Monthy Python guys used to say, and now for something completely different:
http://www.mediafire.com/?dtm40omy3nm
Well if someone doesn't like your voice they can choose not to listen, right? No problemo!
I thought that was really cool on the backup vocals: you mixed your own voice there, right? Very cool.
I love the idea of the song. There is nothing more central to my way of thinking these days than "life is lessons".
Suggestion: why not post your lyrics here, maybe it is a help to especially non-native English speakers to quickly grasp the song. I say this because my workmates and I have been pointing out to each other some of our favourite songs in our native tongue (mine is English) and we find that we have trouble grasping the song right away until we can see the text of the lyrics.
Hi, breton thank you!, yes you´re right. Actually i was thinking to post the lyrics for feedback purposes since i´m not a native English speaker, i think that if any member would like to make suggestions for the lyrics or the music that would be great, this is a network!, so please, if any of you guys wish to work on it go ahead! ;D. Here the Lyrics:
"Self Advice (All is lessons)"
The day you always were expecting for
At last has come so...
Excuses time has ended shut your mouth
But keep your eyes open Watch out!
Boy take care, this could be your last chance
Act your age, be a man
You´re on charge now
Life had just begun
Forget your cramps and toss the dice
Your chances are intact
No more tricks or dirty treats, listen
There´s no magic keys!
Boy take care...
Just do what you´ve learned
and if you do it well or if you fail it´s Ok
Cause ALL IS LESSONS
Then maybe one day
Getting more aware you´ll upgrade
Another day...
But try this day come on you lazy, damn it!
No more rest
So much years you´ve been asleep
You´ve lived an eternal dream
(Wake up, wake up)And now it´s time to awake
(sleepers awake) Stop of being that fake
Raise your head
Walk straight
Keep your guard high
Life had just begun
:)