a poem

Oxajil

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I'd like to share this with you:

At some moments while reading the Wave I get these teary eyes, because I sense and see the effort Laura makes
so that we may see and hear. Reading some parts (especially those that I might recognize), I realize how Beautiful it is.
I get the same feeling when I think about Sott.net
And then I think about this community, how everyone helps each other. Not only one way, but every way.

A community where people come together, perhaps with a same goal and different lessons, but nonetheless all helpful.
Here to learn and help each other. Serve themselves by serving others, or at least, trying so.
Through this material I have learned a whole new meaning of "Beauty".
As Laura said: "Remember the fate of the "ugly duckling"... he was really a lovely swan. To ducks only, he was ugly. Swans know their own."

I will never forget that moment when I was very young and I was sitting on my bed looking outside, saying to God that I think that
I will be a part of something big some time. When I stood up, I thought it was a silly comment to make, perhaps I was watching too many movies.
But now I think that maybe it wasn't that silly, though we are here just to do what we do.

Laura's prayer of the soul is probably the most Beautiful poem/prayer that I have ever read (and especially heard!).

Being inspired by everyone here, the latest sessions and this "feeling" I wrote the following poem (You can see I was very much inspired by Laura's "Prayer of the Soul" and used some of the sentences :-[). It might sound a bit silly, but a strong feeling made me post it anyway! Hope you like it):



May we Sing
And may our voices Be in Resonance with All

May our dances Open the Creativity in Ourselves
So that we may See

May our feet connect with Earth and Beyond through Divine Gravity
So that we may Feel

May Our singing connect Ourselves with Each Other and One
So that we may Hear

May Our Hands reach All
through Understanding and Knowledge

Together we stand
Hallelujah
 
Simply wonderful
Thank you for sharing Oxagil

The moment of inspiration, is great isn't it?
A great sense of belonging and completeness
 
Another poem I wrote down recently..

two sides of a story

sad
incomplete
hopeless
machine - desiring to self-destruct any time soon

oh divine cosmic mind
please help me
please guide me
through this tunnel
this tunnel of despair

i see you
smiling upon me
no matter where i go
there you are
it seems you know
where i'm going - it gives me hope

smiling
complete
hopeful
being - choosing to be in timeless and limitless existence
i wonder

could you be my reflection in my thoughts of imagination?
 
Based on a piece of art I made myself with Photoshop:

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Diary of Eternal Thoughts

just the two of us

just 1+1=2
and maybe 1+1=1
for a moment perhaps 1+1=0

just us dancing in eternity

no one to bother us
no one to judge us

just us dancing in eternity

and only God is watching us

it makes us shy
 
Thanks JonnyRadar!

Just something simple :-[ :

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People seem to be in love with what's on the screen
Human beings seem to be dancing to the music
Children seem to graduate

Everyone is eating
The food must taste good

They all seem to be living their lives
They all seem to have been blessed

No...
It seems like the devils are blocking the view

I feel good
knowing I can take a peek between their claws

When I read the signs
The signs of the times
 
Very nice indeed Oxajil, thanks for sharing.

Did your stream of creativity happen to conjunct with the full moon/Mars? Just Curious.

Maybe your poetry could front some fine background music.......part of a group composition of sorts?
 
Thank you guys!

cholas said:
Did your stream of creativity happen to conjunct with the full moon/Mars? Just Curious.

Maybe your poetry could front some fine background music.......part of a group composition of sorts?

That could be the case! Don't know. Today it's half moon and wrote another one, so :P

Front some background music? Hmm I don't think my poems are that good, but it would be fun (if I understood you correctly).

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my tears taste
a bit like you

you must be sad

miss
there is no one else
i will wait for you to come
so you can wash away the present
and bring every lost reliving memory back

so everything will be as it used to be

i promise miss sea
i'll make you a sand castle in return
will you bring everything and everyone back?
 
Deedlet said:
Very nice thread of poems Oxajil- I've enjoyed all of them. Keep em' coming! :)

I can only second that, Oxajil, those poems are beautiful and touching, thanks a lot for sharing them! :)
 
Puzzle said:
Deedlet said:
Very nice thread of poems Oxajil- I've enjoyed all of them. Keep em' coming! :)

I can only second that, Oxajil, those poems are beautiful and touching, thanks a lot for sharing them! :)

I liked them a lot too! Beautiful indeed.
 
Yes, these are very nice Oxajil -- I couldn't help but wonder if you these were fueled by some of the energy at your disposal after emerging from the other end of the ordeals you talked about in your recent Swamp thread. Thanks very much for sharing them :)
 
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