a poem

Thanks!! :-[

Shijing, that could be true.

Lately I'm feeling so much better!
And the music I'm listening to, which is instrumental/classical, is really inspiring.
I was looking at this picture of this little boy while listening to a beautiful piece of music in the background and had the urge to write a story/poem.
 
How sensitivity, that was lovely Oxajil. Thanks for sharing. :flowers:

P.S. Don´t you write lyrics for songs?
 
I loved the poem and i'm glad you decided to post it, the feelings involved are no stranger to me. i hope to be a writer myself some day, and if this is your goal/dream then i suggest you go for it, you've deffinately got the stuff it takes to put something truly inspiring into words, don't ever doubt yourself.
 
Thank you Tykes and Andrew M.!
Andrew M. I think that if you like being a writer you should definitely go for it!
And no Tykes, I don't write lyrics for songs, though sometimes I did with my little brother just for fun :P

Feel pretty bad today, which I will explain soon somewhere in the Swamp.

Title is Unacknowledged Truth

I looked horror in the eyes

cold and so far away
in my eyes, so full of lies

lies that pierce through my heart
my tears try to clean the wound
my words try to defend the soul

raped soul and a stolen, broken heart
how more cruel can horror be

laying on the floor bleeding
blood covering the grounds I believed in
the grounds I loved and cherished
illusionary grounds now

as I lay on the chilling floor
I go on looking and looking
For the fallen pieces of my heart

If only I would use my eyes
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Searching for You

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So I've been walking
and looking
admiring every green, blue, red and yellow
all the colors that spring from your heart
am looking
looking for you
I know you're hiding
somewhere, somehow
you promised
you'd hold me if I would
find you

wish I could see
and hear your footsteps

midnight, too tired to look further
I lie down, on the ground
I smell the grass, the soil, the flowers, and I hear, I feel, I
look, I see, I Am. I feel my toes curling, my legs moving, my
stomach breathing, my, whole body, inside, and out. I can sense it all.
Too much to bear, and yet so peaceful.

I found you
and I smile

this must be
how it feels like

being hold by you
 
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