Chapter 20:
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It seems Joe's article has not been transferred to the new site. Would it make sense to delete the 'appendinx' part of the sentence after the coma and add a link to the article instead? It's here: http://www.cassiopaea.org/cass/cult-ivating_terror.htm
2. (next pagragraph) raison d’être --> raison d'être (or: raison d'etre, if there is a problem with diacritics);
the same para: "work domake them worthy" --> do make
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As a slight diversion, I want to suggest that the reader consider this issue of “cults” more closely, by reading an article on the website by Joe Quinn called “Cult-ivating Terror”, which is included here as an appendix
It seems Joe's article has not been transferred to the new site. Would it make sense to delete the 'appendinx' part of the sentence after the coma and add a link to the article instead? It's here: http://www.cassiopaea.org/cass/cult-ivating_terror.htm
2. (next pagragraph) raison d’être --> raison d'être (or: raison d'etre, if there is a problem with diacritics);
the same para: "work domake them worthy" --> do make