Re: The Odyssey - question for all!
Laura said:
Can somebody take a look and give an outline?
Sure can:
From Page 28 of Louden's book "The Odyssey: Structure, Narration, and Meaning"
A1: Ithakan Sequence, book 1 through book 4
B1:Skherian Sequence, end of book 5.282 through book 8
C1: Aian Sequence: Book 9 through book 11.332
Intermezzo: 11.333-82
C2: Aian Sequence: book 11.383 through book 12
B2: Skherian Sequence, book 13.1 through 187a
A2: Ithakan Sequence, book 13.187b through book 24.
So the Intermezzo is smack dab in the middle. And it interrupts Odysseus' story of his journey into the underworld. I believe the transition into the Intermezzo is right here, following Odysseus' descriptions of the various heroes and heroines he saw in Hades:
"I also saw Maera and Clymene and hateful Eriphyle, who sold her own husband for gold. But it would take me all night if I were to name every single one of the wives and daughters of heroes whom I saw, and it is time for me to go to bed, either on board ship with my crew, or here. As for my escort, heaven and yourselves will see to it."
Here he ended, and the guests sat all of them enthralled and speechless throughout the covered cloister. Then Arete said to them:
"What do you think of this man, O Phaecians? Is he not tall and good looking, and is he not Clever? True, he is my own guest, but all of you share in the distinction. Do not he a hurry to send him away, nor niggardly in the presents you make to one who is in such great need, for heaven has blessed all of you with great abundance."
Then spoke the aged hero Echeneus who was one of the oldest men among them, "My friends," said he, "what our august queen has just said to us is both reasonable and to the purpose, therefore be persuaded by it; but the decision whether in word or deed rests ultimately with King Alcinous."
"The thing shall be done," exclaimed Alcinous, "as surely as I still live and reign over the Phaeacians. Our guest is indeed very anxious to get home, still we must persuade him to remain with us until to-morrow, by which time I shall be able to get together the whole sum that I mean to give him. As regards- his escort it will be a matter for you all, and mine above all others as the chief person among you."
And Ulysses answered, "King Alcinous, if you were to bid me to stay here for a whole twelve months, and then speed me on my way, loaded with your noble gifts, I should obey you gladly and it would redound greatly to my advantage, for I should return fuller-handed to my own people, and should thus be more respected and beloved by all who see me when I get back to Ithaca."
"Ulysses," replied Alcinous, "not one of us who sees you has any idea that you are a charlatan or a swindler. I know there are many people going about who tell such plausible stories that it is very hard to see through them, but there is a style about your language which assures me of your good disposition. Moreover you have told the story of your own misfortunes, and those of the Argives, as though you were a practised bard; but tell me, and tell me true, whether you saw any of the mighty heroes who went to Troy at the same time with yourself, and perished there. The evenings are still at their longest, and it is not yet bed time- go on, therefore, with your divine story, for I could stay here listening till to-morrow morning, so long as you will continue to tell us of your adventures."
"Alcinous," answered Ulysses, "there is a time for making speeches, and a time for going to bed; nevertheless, since you so desire, I will not refrain from telling you the still sadder tale of those of my comrades who did not fall fighting with the Trojans, but perished on their return, through the treachery of a wicked woman.
So, because of this story, Arete, who was formerly suspicious of Odysseus, now decides he's a pretty good guy, and wishes he will proceed with his tales. So we have the wooing of another powerful female, and a passing further into both Odysseus' accounts and the progression of his journey home. Also, according to Louden:
In the Intermezzo, as he would coax his guest into saying more about the descent into Hades, Alkinoos notes, "Here is a night that is very long, it is endless." In response to Odysseus' request for his own story, Eumaios observes, as prelude, "these nights are endless,". The two passages are the only instances in all of Homer and Hesiod where [these Greek modifications are made].
I can't type out the actual Greek on the computer so I hope those who can read it can get a copy of the book.
Here's something I found at
_http://digitalcommons.colby.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=3365&context=cq&sei-redir=1#search=%22intermezzo%20odyssey%22
The intermezzo will be seen to conform to Parry's model of interruption within the Odyssey at the
same time as it interrupts the Odyssey in the manner studied by Fenik. In the
fourth section, I argue that interruption within the Odyssey, dispelling
enchantment and provoking critical reflection, serves an important reflexive
function. Such internal interruption calls attention to the poet's use of the
interruption technique, which in its turn temporarily dispels the aura of
enchantment created by the Odyssey itself and invites the external audience
of the poem to adopt a rational approach to what they hear. In explaining the
use of interruption as a narrative technique employed to overcome the spell
of poetry and provoke analysis,
Now right here I don't think he's talking specifically about the Intermezzo we're dealing with, but what he says does make sense to me. So the break there is to give us a chance to snap out of a dissociative state and to think critically about the story Odysseus has been telling, which is interrupted right at the point that he's recapping his visit with all the Greek heroes and heroines, which serves to make the poem much more conscious, and also puts it at the center of a "mosaic" of Greek thought/stories.
Laura said:
A: Thinking in internally spherical terms, rather than using
linear "point blank" approach. The whole picture is seen
by seeing the whole scene.
Q: (L) Well, I guess that is why I guess I get into so many
thought patterns...
A: Picture yourself as being at the center of a mosaic.
{...}
Perhaps the characters he meets there are themselves clues to something bigger? That may make sense considering that the intended audience would have been well versed in these stories. That also may be "missing the mark" but it's what crosses my mind. I myself am not well read on Greek mythology.
Odysseus also has complete control over the situation in Hades, by holding his sword over the blood offerings which the ghosts seem to need in order to become "reasonable beings". Could this have anything to do with conserving one's energy around OPs? Might be a stretch there. But as Louden puts it, Odysseus' crew descends to Hades for reasons that parallel the deaths of the suitors. Both groups feasted extravagantly in the house of a powerful female figure, that of Penelope and Kirke, though the crew were given permission, and were allowed to descend to Hades and return to the living (though not for long). As Kirke says: "Wretches, who, while alive, have descended to the house of Hades, twice-dead, when the rest of humanity dies once". There are also the parallel prophecies concerning the suitors and the crew from Teiresias in the Underworld and Theoklymenos in Ithaka, which connects this sequence to the finale.
Also, the Intermezzo itself is full of hospitality and of trust, specifically the trust Odysseus' hosts show by complimenting his stories and not assuming him to be a "swindler". There may be further lessons there, as in the necessity of internalizing one's experiences in the "underworld" in a way that renders them useful and comprehensible to others in a group. This could also combat the influence of monolithic mythic images which tend to impress their own sort of consciousness onto us, hypnotizing us and keeping us from understanding our own experiences. That's all I can think of right now, but I hope this is along the lines of what you're looking for.